Dear students,
Here you are the stories you wrote in groups. Send a comment with your name and group (just morning or evening group) and a short comment about your favourite story (state the number of the story). You can´t vote for the story you began.
The group that gets mores "likes" will have a treat in next class session.
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It was midnight and I was walking with my friends.We were daring each other
into doing weird things. Suddenly, we saw a big spooky house, it was the
darkest one we had ever seen. As we were walking by, we realized that there was
a strange shadow behind the window. However, it disappeared as soon as we
turned around. Suddenly, this shadow appeared in the ceiling and started to
spread all around the walls taking a goat shape with big horns and something
that appeared in the ground between my
legs made me fall down.
María, Mireya and Gabriela.
Last Halloween, me and my friends went to a haunted house. It stood in
the misty, dark, spooky forest. As we walked by, we started to hear an
evil creature creeping into us. Then, we saw a house in the horizon and we
thought that would be a safe place to stay that night. Inside this creepy
house, we found a five yeard-old girl singing a hair-rising song, which said
"you´re going to die tonight", but we were drunk so we just laughed
and went upstairs. There, we saw a door at the end of the corridor, which we
decided to open. Surprisingly, there was a coffin in that room. As soon as we
saw it, we screamed and ran out of that horrifying house.
Tamara, Lidia and Beatriz
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3.
Everything started in a cold winter afternoon,
when a strange man invited us to visit the old mansion. There were a lot of
corridors covered with wood and an old door where we could read the mansion’s
legend. On the door, there was a bloody hand-print. That was a very bad sign.
So, we decided to open the door and as soon as we did it, we felt an unbearable
odor.
When we were in the hall, we saw a pool of
blood. Then, at that moment, we expected the worst, and scared to death, we
left the house running as fast as we could.
When we arrived at a place we considered safe,
we went to report it to the police and tell them that someone had been murdered
in that house. Then we told the police where the house was, and they went there
quickly. They had a good time talking to the man and inspecting the house, but
they found nothing, so they left the house and the case was filed because there
was no evidence of such a murder.
Time was passing by and one day, the children
were doing some searching online and it turned out that in that house there had
been a murder, but it had been 150 years ago. So, as all this gave them such
bad feelings, they stopped investigating and tried to continue their life as
normally as possible.
Adrián, Javier y Sara.
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4.
It was a dark
and cold night. We were walking along a winding road when suddenly we saw an
old mansion on the top of a hill.
Nobody seemed to
live there and we decided to get in. There was a big hall with a huge chimney.
We lit a fire with the logs we found next to the wall.
Suddenly, a high
pitched scream was heard all around the house, we stood up as quickly as we
could. We tried to find out where the scream came from. Then, we discovered a
corpse in the bathroom. The bathroom was all covered with blood and there were
footprints all over the floor. There is a killer among us and we are going to
discover him. Surprisingly, we saw a
knife stabbed in somebody´s back. “Is it Bill the killer? Would someone blame
Bill as the murderer? Abruptly, the light went out and when the light came back
Bill was not in the house and we never saw Bill again.
Víctor, Ana and Darío.
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5. During the summer camp we went out without permission
to the forest while everybody was sleeping. It was a full moon night.
Suddenly, we discovered a big ruined house. We decided
to go inside because the door was open. When we were inside, we heard the door
slameed. We began to be scared. There were no lights and strange noises
appeared.
It was a stormy night so a thunder illuminated and showed
all the shadows. One of the shadows started to get closer and closer …..another
thunder illuminated the wall, which was covered with blood.
We all screamed and ran away from the shadow.
Unfortunately, we got separated. Jimmy was alone in a corridor and noticed that
a shadow was following him. He realized that the shadow was a hound. Jimmy
carried some biscuits and threw them to the hound to distract it.
He ran away and fortunately he could find his friends.
They returned to the summer camp where everybody was dead. We were the only
ones alive.
Susana, Ana and Ana María.
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6.
Five
children were walking near an orphanage when their dog got lost. They started
to run after the dog when suddenly, one of the children heard something strange
near the orphan´s home.
They decided
to go into the asylum to see what was happening. The children tried to switch the lights on but they didn't work. Suddenly,
the dog ran away into the kitchen. The children followed it and found Chicote stabbing their dog! They
screamed and ran away. However, they could not find the exit so they got lost.
Suddenly,
one of them disappeared into the darkness of the old orphanage, so the others
tried to find him with no results. Blood still fresh in the walls and a big
knife appeared nailed in a human head in the wall.
After that
terrible situation, the children ran out looking for help, but what they didn't
know was that Chicote was following them...
To be
continued...
Jacobo, Lidia, Carlos and Paula.
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After a lot
of time thinking about the perfect 'Family weekend' in a little village of
Asturias they arrived there, four human beings and the dog.
At that time
a big thunderstorm began, all the lights were swiched off and they had to stay
in the darkness.
They were
searching for some candles but they couldn't find them. Suddenly the door of
the fence started to open and close . The telephone rang and my dad answered
it. “Hello who is it?”
“Na, na, na,
na....” (little girls singing)
“Hello who is
there?” My dad repeated.
“Na, na, na,
na ....(again singing) I'M GONNA KILL YOU !!!! “Said another scarifying and
deeper voice.
The telephone
rang again and when my father answered it he heard a voice saying:
“This is the
new Halloween Vodafone advertisement, Na, na, na, na...Do you want to try our
new Pumpkin phone model?”
Finally, the
whole family started to laugh but the telephone rang again with a Na, na,
na....song . This time all of them asked for one Pumpkin model for everyone.
At the end it
was not a peaceful weekend but funny anyway.
Charo, Eva and Mario Guzmán.
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8.
Two investigators called Mulder and Scully went into a haunted house. The family were scared about strange noises in the
house at midnight.
An owl was heard. Scully went to the living room to check what was
going on. Then, she found a bloody head in the middle of the floor.
Consequently, she went back to knock in Mulder`s door. Noises kept sounding in
the basement. They thought it could be a ghost inside the house and tried
to catch it.
They called the local ghostbusters. When they arrived, they realized that
the ghost was the worst that they had ever seen.
Their gadgets weren`t enough to capture it and the ghost cut the head
of the ghostbuster leader, who became a new ghost, while everybody fled
from the house.
But do you know who was the deceased leader?
He was Chicote!! And that is the
reason why he always appears on TV programmes fighting with restaurant owners.
He wanted some revenge, because the ghost was a restaurant owner.
Written by the Chicotes
12 comments:
Number 8 is my favourite one. A story containing a bloody head remembers me the goodfather films and is an amazing element to introduce scare and revenge into action.
Ana mañanas. I love the number 8 Because It has a funny ende.
Tamara: I like number 3. I think it is the most original.
Ángel Lopez - Morning - 7 - I've chosen that one because it's the more original one. And cause there isn't anything more fearing than Vodafone's callings!
Sofía mornings.
My favorite story is number 4.
I think it's short, simple and whose open and intriguing end let us think about what happened.
Ana María- My favourite story is number 7. Happy end for a terror story but...is there anything more frightned than this kind of calling?;)
Mario (morning / evening). For me 3, it has a good development
Beatriz, mornings. My favorite story is number 5. I was shocked because of the end, truly unexpected.
My favourite short story is number 7. On the one hand it mixes some of the most typical ingredients for a short haunted house story( a happy family disturbed by a sudden thunderstone in the middle of the night, no lights except the lightning , the sound of the fence door)…and on the other hand, the” na na na “sound that will lead the reader to the most common daily life nightmare: mobile phone companies advertising… And the happy family ends laughing…The same as I did!
Azucena(evening group)
My vote is for: Story number 7.
Funny end!
LOL
Paula García;
My favourite story is number 7. I think that it starts out quite a mystery, and then it ends up as a funny joke about Vodafone, I like it.
In my opinion the funniest one is the number 7. It is something that could happen to everyone and I think the feelings that are reflected could be the same than the people in the story!
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